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Tonight my dear by ~Dikembe:iconDikembe:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


Wake up from a nightmare
With your face next to mine
That blank stare
So refreshing and kind

My heart thumping out of my chest
This heart which is yours
Needs to come to rest
This heart which is so sore

It was a dream
And nothing more
It would have to seem
That I have dreamt it before

With relief I see your face
No more can I take it
Do not leave me alone in this place
Don't leave me alone with heartache

But you are here
And so I can I see
I silently shed a tear
And pull you closer to me

So terrible can my thoughts be
Suddenly they pry
Into the memories so dear to me
And turn them to pain that burns deep inside

Tonight my dear
As every night before
As my dreams unleash my deepest fears
I need you more then ever before
©2007-2009 ~Dikembe
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wrote this just barely...its a sad one but i like it
i hope you do to
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~angel4717:iconangel4717: Nov 24, 2007, 8:13:10 PM
I absolutly love it !!!
I haven't talked to the guy i love for two days and i can't take it anymore... i really need him right now.

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Together We Can Make It While The World Is Crashing Down
-Ready Set Go by Tokio Hotel :heart:;

...We'd Be Nothing Without Those Crazy People We Call Friends:heart::heart:;
~liveinmusic111:iconliveinmusic111: Nov 25, 2007, 10:16:49 AM
This is amazing!! If it was possible to favorite a piece multiple times, I'd do it for this one. Great job =D

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Everyone wants a fairytale...
~Dikembe:iconDikembe: Nov 28, 2007, 7:35:53 PM
thank you
i dont know what came over me
~Dikembe:iconDikembe: Nov 28, 2007, 7:46:09 PM
thanks
why not
i havent talked to her in like 20 hours and i need her
~angel4717:iconangel4717: Nov 29, 2007, 2:29:23 PM
I know the feeling
but after i saw him.., he was back to the same old guy he usually was.
I only see him at school but i guess i do need him, i just have learne to live without seeing him for long periods of time... yet i know i need him more then i can imagine.

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Together We Can Make It While The World Is Crashing Down
-Ready Set Go by Tokio Hotel :heart:;

...We'd Be Nothing Without Those Crazy People We Call Friends:heart::heart:;
~Dikembe:iconDikembe: Nov 30, 2007, 8:15:08 PM
i only see my girl on the weekends
~angel4717:iconangel4717: Dec 1, 2007, 11:30:39 AM
I see the guy i like monday to friday mornings, sometimes two three times at school aswell, and then if his sister feels good then i see him after school and on the weekends... i honestly really see him too much.

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Together We Can Make It While The World Is Crashing Down
-Ready Set Go by Tokio Hotel :heart:;

...We'd Be Nothing Without Those Crazy People We Call Friends:heart::heart:;
~liveinmusic111:iconliveinmusic111: Dec 2, 2007, 7:17:14 PM
you're welcome =)
neither do i, but whatever it was, it sure was good =D

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Everyone wants a fairytale...
~Dikembe:iconDikembe: Dec 3, 2007, 4:30:55 PM
its kinda personal
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